Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Sneak Peek

WIP Wednesday

For a limited time . . . 

My pitch for The Keeper is up on Deana Barnhart's Blog and getting some attention. If you want a sneak 
peek at my query letter and the first 150 words of the book - head on over!!! You don't even have to be sneaky about it.


Susan said...

I LOVE the new first paragraph. It sets the tone for the story PERFECTLY. Sounds like you're getting some great advice on the story/query. Yay!

Valerie Ipson said...

Yay for Susan liking it! (We value your opinion, Susan!)

Tamara said...

Thank you!! First lines are hard to change, but I really think this paragraph was needed.


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